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Guilt Overdose

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Sorry, I had to delete this deviation due to personal reasons.

Thank you for all your comments, they are very much appreciated!
Written for a competition at school, about bullying. I hope it gets published. I did have a few stanzas in there about self-harm but I thought that it might make it a bit morbid. And yes, I have done quite a few poems with the repetative "you are" rhythm in each stanza, but they seem to be the most popular so I thought I might as well use it for something that I could get rewarded for.

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ebonysoul's avatar
this is awesome, and it definitely shows how much hurt someone can cause someone else just by saying things, faving!!!